Today we showed Annabel (our teacher) the rough cut of our video, she was pleased with what we had done so far and has no problem with knowing that we will be able to finish it on time.
However there are some things that we have to change. Firstly, she noticed that there are 2 random fast motion images of our artist in the video and she said that it doesn't really make sense to put them in as it doesn't go with the whole video. She, said that some shots are a bit longer than they need be, so we should cut them down. Next she noticed that we tend to rely on one specific shot too much and it isn't actually one of the best shots that we have, and because we end it with that same shot, she said that we should change it and end it with our artist walking away as it goes with the lyrics which are "let's just see how it goes" so its as If she's walking away with an open mind. We did put that in just before we put in the last close up. Another thing that Annabel noticed was that we have a split screen, where Talia appears four times, but sometimes there's a black out in one corner, she said that we could use it but just don't leave one corner black because it looks slightly odd.
On the other hand, she did have a lot of good things to say as well. She said that it is clear that we worked very hard on it and that she loves the 2 way shot of Talia looking at herself, it works really well. She also said she likes the image that we made, it suits the genre and our artist fantastically. Another thing she liked was that, it is edited very well because each shot fits and links to the following shots. Annabel then said that our video is incredibly good and the planning comes through, and we should be proud of ourselves. So overall Annabel is confident in our video. Even though all of our feedback may seem to be a lot, it isn't because we have taken everything on board and have already started to fix things.
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