Fellow Students Feedback On Rough Cut

Positives From Students:

• The lip synchronisation is perfect and actually seems like that is the artists own song and voice.
• The locations, Mise en scene and Make-Up look good on camera and adds professionalism. 
• The Doppelgänger effect works extremely well and is one of the best things about the Music Video.
• Editing is done well; no one shots is shown more than it is needed to be.
• The use of the camera was excellent, some of the shots looked great and worked well.

Constructive Criticism From Students:

• The ending of the video isn't great because it would look better ending on the walking foot with a fade at the end of it rather than her face looking straight at the camera.
• When there is 3 to 4 shots places on the screen at once it look unnatural and forced, also they seem to spill over each other and would look much better and artistic with some sort of boarder around them to distinguish one shot from another.  
• The tint effect takes away from the natural vibrant look of the video and locations.